good job jhoel nice answer. very detailed.

my comment on cierra

you were missing your resources but great job.

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Cycle 2 week 10

Why is there gravity on the earth but not the moon? The answer is because it is a planet that has population. It also doesn't revolve it rotates. It takes a while for the earth to rotate.
There is also land on earth.

week 9

A sundial is a pointy object. Its not just a pointy object. It also an object that shows were the sun is pointing.I learned that the sun moves also. This is an interesting topic to dicuss.

comment on taylor

nice job taylor. i agree what you said.

comment on cierra

You wrote so much and it makes alot of sense.

Cycle 2 Week 8: Due May 27th

Technology helped me because it improved my writing. Im improving in science by doing my blogs. I can stay on topic more. I will like to have more interesting things to write about.

comments

Nice job Natalie good fact.

Cycle 2 week 7

One thing that causes and oil spill is illegal dumping. Another is collision. That is two out of four. A oil spill happened in Gulf of mexico. I think it was about 2 million gallons of oil.

comment

Nice job Jeffrey. Good details.

comment tykeema

it look and sounds very insightful and full with evidence. But you should add more evidence.

Cycle 2 week 6

One job that engineers have is Aerospace. They design models of aircrafts. They also test the aircrafts. Another is audio engineering. It is a unique endeavor. People take advantage of the sound we hear.

comment to marcus

nice job marcus

comment

You should add more but very nice

Cycle @ week 5 subject 2

The answer to the volume of the object is 60. You have to multiply the base times height times lenght. When you multiply 30 by 2 you will get 60. Multiply 5 times 6 equal 30. That is one way of finding volume of an object.

Cycle 2 Week 5 my blogging

The technology we use in science influence me because it help my ability to think. I can also have better understanding about science because people post comment and tell me how i can improve. Yes, blogging has improved my writing it helps me. It helped me become more persuasive. It even shows on my faifas.

To Jhoel

You accomplish all the things you are supposed to do

Comment to natalie

Nice evidence. You fulfilled expectations.

on Deresha

Good facts. I never knew some of this stuff.

Science And Art

The science that was included was science and art. The arts can enhance learning. All subjects can be connected to art. Science is the most that is connected to science.I learned science and art have a connection.

On neejai

I agree with DSH you had made a few mistakes but they are spelling though.

my comment to Reesha Taylor

You could have added more details. But you have a nice paragraph.

this is my comments

This sound very detailed. It is also very insightful. You make it become entertaining.

Animals & Nature

They wrote this passage so people can know about sea turtles. It says ''Sea turtles have been on earth for millions of years.'' The main thing about it is sea turtles. I learned they used turtles for food. That will be peoples dinner.

Week 6

Some of my responses were correct. Some were correct because some were difficult to answer. My best blog was the gaming blog. It was my best because it was something that I can relate to. I can think about my writing throughly.

Around The world in 1 year

My game is called around the world in one year. In this game you will have to get around the world and help people in 1 year. It will be some obstacles you might cross as like your plane is going to crash. You will have all the weapon you will like. My game is like a detective game

Gaming blog

My game is Cafe World.It has science to do with it.If you leave your food out for a while your food will get rotten.It becomes rotten because it is exposed to oxygen.You can find cafe world on facebook.The higher level you go the more faster your food will rotten.

3.What can you do in the next cycle of blogs to improve your writing?

The most important thing i can do for my next cycle blog is add more details.If I add more details my work will become more exciting to read.My work will become longer if I add more details.I also have to work on is not to use fragments.I will get a bad grade if I have fragments.I really need to proofread so I can know what i did wrong.

car that brakes suddenly comes to a screeching halt. Is the sound energy produced in this conversion a useful form of energy. Explain your answer blog 1

The reason the brakes start screeching is because the force of kinetic energy.It is force being put into the brakes.So when you press on it hard it will start sceeching.If it is raining and the wheel start screeching it is because it is wet.It is also kinetic energy.

Trace electrical energy back to the sun blog 2

The sun has alot of energy.It is transfer from earth to the sun.It is the main thing that controls the energy.The sun has the most energy.So in order for somethin else to work you will need the sun's energy.

3. Many cold packs used for sports injuries are activated by bending the package, causing the substances inside to chemically react. How is heat involved in this process?

Heat is involveled because the package feels the heat from your hands.So since you are bending it heat is making the package cold.It will make the swellness go down.So it is a chemical reaction.The ice particals are breaking up.

Bodies Electric

They had to make a dance with an enginering twist.The first move is all foot work.The blue team used flex sensors.They go anywere you want to put them.They also used a cricket.So when they step on the floor the lights will turn on and off.
I would have tried many things until i got something right.I would have started with something off the computer.Try to trigger the soundwaves from my feet to the dance floor.I learned that you can change the floor color with one step.That is how celebrity dancers make the lights change sometimes.

Week 3 Beat number two

Chorus:When water change from a liquid to a gas it might go slow as molasses.
Verse 1:When liquid change to a gas it has a chemical reaction. The chemicals change the drinks. Thats why when you lift the cup up you still see water at the bottom. Your parents might yell at you and say that you left a ring around the table. But it is not your fault. It is a science thing.
Verse 2:The left over water becomes cooler than the actual H20 was. The air neat the surface. So it actually becomes cooler. The H20 will not be potential or kinetic energy. The scientific thing to say is that the water evaporated and now is a gas.