3.What can you do in the next cycle of blogs to improve your writing?

The most important thing i can do for my next cycle blog is add more details.If I add more details my work will become more exciting to read.My work will become longer if I add more details.I also have to work on is not to use fragments.I will get a bad grade if I have fragments.I really need to proofread so I can know what i did wrong.